Ancient city of the future

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Ancient city of the future

Post by lollozip on Thu Oct 17, 2013 1:43 am

Hey people
this is the latest wip of my training work, a soft version plus a dramatic one.
(Photoshop and Maya)

crits welcome!
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Re: Ancient city of the future

Post by Nick on Thu Oct 17, 2013 8:17 pm

Hi Lorenzo!
I like the second one a bit more than the first. Keeping a bit more saturation helps a lot, and the hard shadows are far more justified with the sunlit sky that you have in the second image. Some areas look like they could do with a bit more work on the textures, and some extra elements to help sell the scale would be good (are those windows on the building in the background?), but it's a cool piece of work, nice one! Smile

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Re: Ancient city of the future

Post by lollozip on Thu Oct 17, 2013 11:50 pm

Hi Nick! thanks for your considerations.
Nick wrote:Some areas look like they could do with a bit more work on the textures, and some extra elements to help sell the scale would be good (are those windows on the building in the background?)
yes, you're right. taller buildings are the only cg elements, that's why they look so "boxy". I just started putting textures & windows. I want them to have a very big scale, something giant, and now I realize that maybe those windows on the top are too big.
what do you suggest me in order to reach this giant scale effect?
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